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[Sage]

Quest - Hands Off Our Food

 

Last sentence:  Funny how nobody does ever does ask me.  (one too many 'does')

 

[Sage]

Quest - Peace Talk Is Cheap

 

Sentence:  I would ask that you go to The Ancient Seat found (in) the very center of Darrowvale and meet the Infernal Empire's envoy.

 

[ordinaryfunguy]

 

 

should that say "I am in need of 50 heads of Garlic"?

not "I have need of 50 heads of Garlic"

 

Farming quest 3 [level 10]

Edited by ordinaryfunguy, 01 October 2015 - 21:37.

[SagaTeller]

nvm i just suck at english. mb

Edited by SagaTeller, 03 October 2015 - 22:03.

[SagaTeller]

In Eldevin market, group summon tele instruction: says 'abilitiy' instead of ability.

[SagaTeller]

 

...she is working on on a project...

[Cremi]

Quest: Assisting the Preperations

NPC: Siyana Rogan

 

It shouldn't say "has" as in I has the thing.

 

Also to make it flow better I would move the "now" to another part of the sentence: "as it is now I who have a request to ask." The now should precede the start of that block and the block starts with I not have.

[Spirit]

Spotted some more typos

 

Quest: Ending Hostilities

NPC: Primorious Hyjon

 

Stage 2 ( for Questbook)

 

Stage 3

 

It should be Legionaire.

 

Quest: There and Back Again

NPC: Novice Corian

 

 

Supposed to be twenty not three!

 

 

Should be a "the" in between "noticed that the spell scroll"

 

And again twenty not three also.

 

Quest: Rattling the Goblins

NPC: Mage Riolan

 

 

Should say "You're".

Edited by Spirit, 14 January 2016 - 03:56.

[cyrus7]

Quest Item: Antelope Steak

"A hefty piece of meat taken from the Antelope in the Fields of Darrwovale."

[Should be "Darrowvale".]

 

Quest text: Wild Game

"Take 25 of 25 Antelope Steaks to Quartermster Bootstrap."

[Should be "Quartermaster".]

[Spirit]

Quest: Desert Rose

 

Think it's meant to say "Petals..." without the A there.

 

 

Quest: Jewels of Azraq

 

NPC: Graldin Nokta

 

 

be should be me.

 

Update:

 

Some more....

 

 

lower case e for egg and space in between "in Arakos".

 

 

Hanch should be lower case h and No comma in Mother Calgorns and "Mighty Zim Zim wants".

 

 

Should be "An extremely"....

 

 

He doesn't sell spell scrolls but essences and weapons

 

Quest: An Arcane Idea

 

NPC: Dante

 

 

Should say "Alchemist Fermii" (where I'm talking back).

 

 

Very last word should say Fermii with a period.

 

update # 3:

 

 

Forgotten Ruins should be capitalized.

 

 

should be eggs with lowercase e not Egg's.

Edited by Spirit, 14 April 2016 - 02:23.

[Aphrodite]

At quest The Source of Starlight, Bonedigger Tenosi asks players to speak to Flamedanger Soiya. 

Everywhere else Soiya is called Flamedancer Soiya.

[AmaV]

Quest name War Will Come Swiftly

[AmaV]

Quest name:

Stalkers in the Woods

 

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[AmaV]

Space in the center of "towards" does not appear to be just a matter of bad kerning. i could be wrong tho.

 

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[AmaV]

Recover the Ancient Tools tells me find them on EAST side of castle, but quest marker is on the WEST side.

 

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[AmaV]

Going Postal: grammatical error.

"he went missing" would be correct, or "he has gone missing."

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[AmaV]

assisting the preparations

 

timber for repairs 

should say east

 

subtle invasion: grammar error

"between" is a preposition. We need to use Subjective pronouns in a prepositional phrase ("me"), not Objective (I).

 

pretty sure you mean to use "tomb" here. somebody is stealing from graves, not pilfering books.

 

needs to read "built"

Edited by AmaV, 01 February 2018 - 13:32.

[livingtarget]

All these should be fixed for next build.

[Winterbourne]

Edited by Winterbourne, 10 January 2020 - 14:22.