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#61 Fizban

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Posted 21 October 2013 - 03:52

Rock Beetles should be Mine Gnomes...

 

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and 'here' should be 'hear'


I can tolerate ignorance, but i cannot stand stupidity

 

the past can't be altered, the future can't be controlled, live for the here and now


#62 Anakiro

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Posted 21 October 2013 - 08:52

Thanks for the reports guys! :)



#63 Alpion

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Posted 23 October 2013 - 08:41

Mining The Past

 

3rd Memorial

 

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has should be have

 

Also item description:

 

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sphere's should be spheres

 

And:

 

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Beetle's should be Beetles


Edited by Alpion, 23 October 2013 - 09:10.

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#64 Bryn

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Posted 24 October 2013 - 00:01

 

"charges unstable" should probably be "unstable charges".


Bryn -  Prophet - lvl 45

Ullr -   Ranger -   lvl 32

Thud - Warrior - lvl 16

Payn -  Templar - lvl 16

Jinx -  Mage -      lvl 10

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Foraging - 45 | Farming - 45 | Prospecting - 45 | Forestry - 45 | Skinning - 34 | Fishing - 45 | Crystal - 45

Alchemy - 45 | Cooking - 45 | Tailoring - 9 | Leather - 9


#65 HuMoR

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Posted 25 October 2013 - 23:23

in the quest "Mushrooms Mushrooms!"
the first sentence at the end says "he site." should say "the site."




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Edited by HuMoR, 25 October 2013 - 23:24.

Characters:
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Level 40 Mage.
Chelsea's Man<3



 


#66 Bryn

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Posted 26 October 2013 - 01:29

 

Who is Vellian Alkorath?  I defeated Treya...  I don't remember this other guy...

 

Oh, and on a previous stage I had to defeat 5 infernals.  But, there were only 3 in the room, so I had to leave and come back to defeat another 3.


Bryn -  Prophet - lvl 45

Ullr -   Ranger -   lvl 32

Thud - Warrior - lvl 16

Payn -  Templar - lvl 16

Jinx -  Mage -      lvl 10

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Foraging - 45 | Farming - 45 | Prospecting - 45 | Forestry - 45 | Skinning - 34 | Fishing - 45 | Crystal - 45

Alchemy - 45 | Cooking - 45 | Tailoring - 9 | Leather - 9


#67 GreyWolf5

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Posted 26 October 2013 - 03:08

Diminutive City: Part 1  Conversation with Inventor Heath

 

"I see your another victim of Jaga Creeds meddling?"

 

Try "I see you're another victim of Jaga Creed's meddling!"

 

It's not really a question that Heath ask.  If you want a question then it should probably be "Are you another victim of Jaga Creed's meddling?"

 



#68 Irradiated

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Posted 26 October 2013 - 10:37

It's not really a question that Heath ask.  If you want a question then it should probably be "Are you another victim of Jaga Creed's meddling?"

Regarding the third point, you're correct that the sentence is not a question in terms of formal writing.  But in conversation people often talk like that.  The 'statement/question I already know the answer to/perhaps this once the answer is otherwise' gives the characters more life.  Speaking, think of the voice starting as a statement, but with a question style upward lilt at the end.

 

I vote leave this one alone. :)


Meleager, ranger

Tuor, templar (Inactive)

Deimos, mage

Thangbrand, warsin (Mostly on vacation)

Bart, ??? (bene trades)


#69 Bryn

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Posted 26 October 2013 - 19:54

 

"an strong" should be "a strong"


Bryn -  Prophet - lvl 45

Ullr -   Ranger -   lvl 32

Thud - Warrior - lvl 16

Payn -  Templar - lvl 16

Jinx -  Mage -      lvl 10

__________________________________________________________________________________

Foraging - 45 | Farming - 45 | Prospecting - 45 | Forestry - 45 | Skinning - 34 | Fishing - 45 | Crystal - 45

Alchemy - 45 | Cooking - 45 | Tailoring - 9 | Leather - 9


#70 Anakiro

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Posted 30 October 2013 - 11:31

Cheers guys, I'm up to date on the thread. :)



#71 GreyWolf5

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Posted 02 November 2013 - 23:15

Conversation in Diminutive City Part one with Remy.

 "Finally I might now be able to slumber! Heres the Thimble."

Need to change to "Here's the Thimble."

 

Same with Issun's converstation that follows.

"Heres that Postage Stamp."

Need to change to "Here's the Thimble."


Edited by GreyWolf5, 02 November 2013 - 23:24.


#72 GreyWolf5

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Posted 03 November 2013 - 03:13

First Conversation with Councillor Zraeth.

 

At end it reads "It's time for you meet our leader..."

 

Probably should be "It's time for you to meet our leader..."



#73 xrxr1

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Posted 03 November 2013 - 05:50

Fishing quest 9 Should read Mackerel


Ranger - levels  -Alchemy 49 . Foraging 49 . Skinning 49 . Leatherworking 49 . Cooking 49 .  Forestry 49 . Cooking 49. Prospecting 49 .  Weaponsmithing 49 .  Farming 49. Fishing 49 . Crystal Cutting 49. Jewelry 49. Tailoring 49.   Armor smithing 49.

 

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#74 GreyWolf5

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Posted 05 November 2013 - 23:51

Colonel Knox in Ending Hostilities

Reads: "Now, is there is anything else?"

Probably don't need the second "is".

 

Crimson Representative in Ending Hostilities

Reads: "Just roll over like a good little puppy for it's goody two-shoes masters?"

Needs to be: "Just roll over like a good little puppy for its goody two-shoes masters?"

 

Archaeologist Kaiten in Time to Collect

Reads: "There's quite a few monsters in the halls..."

Should be "There are quite a few monsters in the halls.."

Unless you are going for a slang accent.



#75 Anakiro

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Posted 06 November 2013 - 09:15

Cheers guys, I've got all those now. :)



#76 Alpion

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Posted 06 November 2013 - 18:56

typo10.jpg

 

Hows should be How's (I believe...)


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#77 Alpion

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Posted 07 November 2013 - 17:40

Might want consistency in naming:

 

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#78 Anakiro

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Posted 08 November 2013 - 09:46

Correct on both counts. Thanks. :D



#79 ShadowLinx

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Posted 15 November 2013 - 02:14

in murky depths, when you try to use the ladder to the third level next to the wife, but haven't gotten far enough along in the quest to use it, it says "You cannot use thie... yet."


Edited by ShadowLinx, 15 November 2013 - 02:15.


#80 GreyWolf5

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Posted 15 November 2013 - 05:14

In opening conversation with order of life priest when you come out of void he says:

 

"A rescue mission you were involved in went horribly wrong, resulting the the majority of you being trapped in..."

 

Need to change the first "the" to "in".

 




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