5 replies to this topic

[forhorsmn]

If I could get some CnC that would be great.

I hate the text on this one. Need to find some different stuff to use.


Again, not sure what text to use.

[MyCurse]

1st: Nice attempt at depth but not quite there yet...the sharpened brush(?) is actually distracting from the focal because there is too much going on...you need to give it some flow.

[Wesleysdf]

Both are very cool but there are some things that should be improved/changed

1st sig:
Define the focal more; the render is too blended with the effects
Text is bad, font and placement

2nd sig:
the lightsource at upper-right is awkward. Its too strong and too small, also its wrong placed as the light comes from the botton right side of the girl

[Shiver]

Both are very cool but there are some things that should be improved/changed

1st sig:
Define the focal more; the render is too blended with the effects
Text is bad, font and placement

2nd sig:
the lightsource at upper-right is awkward. Its too strong and too small, also its wrong placed as the light comes from the botton right side of the girl

Definitely this, but to add to that, all of those bubbles in the second sig are just really distracting and annoying.

[dragon1314]

Both are very cool but there are some things that should be improved/changed

1st sig:
Define the focal more; the render is too blended with the effects
Text is bad, font and placement

2nd sig:
the lightsource at upper-right is awkward. Its too strong and too small, also its wrong placed as the light comes from the botton right side of the girl

Definitely this, but to add to that, all of those bubbles in the second sig are just really distracting and annoying.

Actually those bubbles are perfect:). Other than lighting is wrong, it's solid piece.KIA

[stormfury3]

Actually those bubbles are perfect:). Other than lighting is wrong, it's solid piece.KIA

this^^