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[ghetoghost]

Version 1


Version 2



Version 3


Tried something new. I know my smudging needs a lotta' work and so does text. Other than that though, how is it?



Training for SOTW. Need some CnC on this piece please
Don't judge my text work, i know it needs help haha

[TreeFrog]

Dont use Papyrus for your font. Ever. The lighting doesnt make sense. Shadows suggest it should be from above but it looks like you added another light source bellow him. Maybe add some directional splatters so its not as static?

[ghetoghost]

Dont use Papyrus for your font. Ever. The lighting doesnt make sense. Shadows suggest it should be from above but it looks like you added another light source bellow him. Maybe add some directional splatters so its not as static?

Darkened the bottom. Added a couple things over the static pieces. Got rid of text

[TreeFrog]

Much better.

[ghetoghost]

I think i nailed it on V3 except for the bottom right corner. Too much blackness? I don't know, signatures aren't my strength. Neither are avatars or other graphics

[uhsword]

I think i nailed it on V3 except for the bottom right corner. Too much blackness? I don't know, signatures aren't my strength. Neither are avatars or other graphics

:shock: Say what? Looks good to me the way he's posing it looks like there could be more effects added in then again that might make it too messy keep it up

[jzaz]

By any chance, did you use this tut?
http://ffadicted.dev... ... -105186122

[ghetoghost]

By any chance, did you use this tut?
http://ffadicted.dev... ... -105186122

Nope, i went freestyle. I may have to use that one for my next sig though

[Mao]

I think the first one came out great, except the font shade really light, and hard to read. The other 2 just seem to dark.

[PeterOwnz]

the third one is pretty cool, one thing i think would be a cool touch is a soft brush behind the render and in front at a low% screen in a yellow-orange to give a glow to it, some foreground effects couldn't hurt

[eclairs]

I like the third one. Yes the bottom right is a bit too black :|
A stronger light source and a bit of depth would help.
try the simple sharpen and blur method

[ghetoghost]

Thanks for the tips guys Added a new sig so if y'all could CnC that, that would be nice

[eclairs]

Needs more light? brightness?

[Sustortias]

Nice!

v3 my fave, just needs really nice text now and would be fine I think.

[Sahardy]

Unexciting. :|

For such a great render, the whole piece lacks depth. It just looks flat and boring. The lighting is poor.

It just looks like a background, render, C4Ds, random scan lines and a big, soft, black brush.