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[Haloartist]

Looked at a few PSDs/Tutorials and downloaded some C4D's and such.

All criticism is welcome.

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--V2--

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[Haloartist]

Anyone?

[ghetoghost]

The text is wrong, it should say "ghetoghost"

[douglasj]

I don't like the blue lines on the far right. They don't really suit try making them go vertical instead of horizontal like the ones of the far left.

Text looks to fancy try using plain.

Other than that I freakin love it. Its really great :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

[Lsrpm]

So awesome..very good job. Just the text can use some tweaking

[Wesleysdf]

Lower the opacity of the dark outter glow and thats it! pretty good job mate, I had to log in just to comment

[TreeFrog]

Change up your text, you've been using that style on everything and it doesnt work on everything.

[Haloartist]

Enh the text wasn't meant to be perm. Just something until it's bought in the auction. I'll post another version though. o:

[Sustortias]

Was gonna cc this before but you'd just cc'd mine and it didn't seem proper to cc straight back at that time.

I respect you as an artist and when your good your really good but this tbh is by no means your best.

The flow (especially the right hand side) just seems chaotic to me which is why i didn't cc back before cos you'd just mentioned my anime background (and i agree the initial one sucked cos the red was outta place with the theme).

The blue dots to the right drag the eye away too much and looking to the left of tag, the blue 'blocks' top left are pretty sharp then just below you have this blurred version of kinda same thing so the perceptions thrown off.

Like i said before, you do make great works, but just not feelin this one.

[Haloartist]

Was gonna cc this before but you'd just cc'd mine and it didn't seem proper to cc straight back at that time.

I respect you as an artist and when your good your really good but this tbh is by no means your best.

The flow (especially the right hand side) just seems chaotic to me which is why i didn't cc back before cos you'd just mentioned my anime background (and i agree the initial one sucked cos the red was outta place with the theme).

The blue dots to the right drag the eye away too much and looking to the left of tag, the blue 'blocks' top left are pretty sharp then just below you have this blurred version of kinda same thing so the perceptions thrown off.

Like i said before, you do make great works, but just not feelin this one.

The blocks you are talking about got a little fuzzed I think because of a distort layer I applied. But until the updated version I did no blurring.

Either way! A new version is posted.

[ghetoghost]

I like v2 a lot more. It feels more smooth and cleaned up but you still got the text wrong. It should say "ghetoghost"

[Haloartist]

I like v2 a lot more. It feels more smooth and cleaned up but you still got the text wrong. It should say "ghetoghost"

You'll have to get it in the auction.

[TreeFrog]

One extreme to the other, the blue stuff seems too blurred while also looking like its on the same plane as the guy and it kind of messes up the depth. I like that you got rid of those blue lines or whatever they were. Text placement was better in V1.

[Haloartist]

One extreme to the other, the blue stuff seems too blurred while also looking like its on the same plane as the guy and it kind of messes up the depth. I like that you got rid of those blue lines or whatever they were. Text placement was better in V1.

Now ya' see I changed it first to make sust happy. That's why I didn't blur it before, because to me. It looked like the blue C4D was on the same level as my render so to help the depth I didn't blur it.

[uhsword]

One extreme to the other, the blue stuff seems too blurred while also looking like its on the same plane as the guy and it kind of messes up the depth. I like that you got rid of those blue lines or whatever they were. Text placement was better in V1.

Now ya' see I changed it first to make sust happy. That's why I didn't blur it before, because to me. It looked like the blue C4D was on the same level as my render so to help the depth I didn't blur it.

Yeah if this was a contest I would have a hard time choosing which version to pick looking at the both of them ever since you blurred the original one out.. maybe have no text and keep it for yourself?

[Haloartist]

One extreme to the other, the blue stuff seems too blurred while also looking like its on the same plane as the guy and it kind of messes up the depth. I like that you got rid of those blue lines or whatever they were. Text placement was better in V1.

Now ya' see I changed it first to make sust happy. That's why I didn't blur it before, because to me. It looked like the blue C4D was on the same level as my render so to help the depth I didn't blur it.

Yeah if this was a contest I would have a hard time choosing which version to pick looking at the both of them ever since you blurred the original one out.. maybe have no text and keep it for yourself?

lol nah I need the fsp.

I just wish some people here were more open and didn't always go by the book on whats a good signature and what isn't.

[uhsword]

:shock: Your new sig.. 10/10 for sure hehe

Well for me I like them both pieces tho the rendering could be done slightly if not fully better and if the majority were open books it'll be easier to figure out if he/she is wearing a mask or something underneath the usual when others would merely take glances of them out of curiosity possible ignorance habitual actions or distraction :wink:

[TreeFrog]

One extreme to the other, the blue stuff seems too blurred while also looking like its on the same plane as the guy and it kind of messes up the depth. I like that you got rid of those blue lines or whatever they were. Text placement was better in V1.

Now ya' see I changed it first to make sust happy. That's why I didn't blur it before, because to me. It looked like the blue C4D was on the same level as my render so to help the depth I didn't blur it.

Its just a matter of preference. Susto usually goes for the more out of focus style which is why I believe he would prefer it that way. As to your other comment about being by the book, I'm not sure who thats directed at but I always judge things by the standards I learned from you and give honest criticism as you always had given me.

[uhsword]

Well said.

[mini100]

well i got lost when all of you guys started talking about a book...

but back to cnc.... looks great but i agree that you have 2 sides of extreme... i dont really think the stuff on the left needs to be blurred... looked better without in my opinion and maybe blur some of the stuff on the right. looks way better without the blue line things on the right. also just a personal preference i would blur some of the red specks that are on the sig. but thats just a personal preference. overall very nice.