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#1 forhorsmn

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Posted 16 December 2012 - 19:08

Here are a couple of my most recent pieces. What do you think?
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#2 fs_abhishek11

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Posted 17 December 2012 - 09:05

love the first once. Just the gap between his arm and his body seems weird. Fix that up n perfect ;)

#3 dragon1314

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Posted 17 December 2012 - 10:35

1. text too plain, too monotone, can be sharpened just a bit more. Can use some more blending (yes, i'm serious)

2. This one is good except the text.

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#4 Sustortias

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Posted 20 December 2012 - 19:30

I agree with dragon the first one is too mono, interesting piece nonetheless.

Now the second one, that is highly polished pro work, could use a little boost in places, especially the color on and around focal.

Text is ok could be a little better. All in all a great piece though and very nice flow/depth/fx.

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