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#1 mumble

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Posted 20 August 2016 - 20:14

Im looking for some constructive criticism on a piece I just made. Its been a while since Ive done anything like this. Any advice is much appreciated videos and tutorials are also appreciated (but more).

 

Dark Render

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Light Render

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And also this one.

 

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[New Added Below]

 

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*Note all without names are for sale


Edited by mumble, 21 October 2016 - 03:02.

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“You say you love rain, but you use an umbrella to walk under it. You say you love sun, but you seek shelter when it is shining. You say you love wind, but when it comes you close your windows. So that's why I'm scared when you say you love me.”

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#2 Undjuvion

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Posted 20 August 2016 - 22:48

well, they are BOTH great pics, they are also BOTH great backgrounds, to me the first is too dark for the background, the second is too bright for the background ;p ;p a simpler way for most is, they are just out of place for the background, or the reverse obviously :-)

 

 

edit: its cool, id prob do the same with graphics ;p


Edited by Undjuvion, 20 August 2016 - 22:49.


#3 mumble

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Posted 20 August 2016 - 22:59

well, they are BOTH great pics, they are also BOTH great backgrounds, to me the first is too dark for the background, the second is too bright for the background ;p ;p a simpler way for most is, they are just out of place for the background, or the reverse obviously :-)

 

 

edit: its cool, id prob do the same with graphics ;p

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I think I agree kind of prefer this one more thank you!


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“You say you love rain, but you use an umbrella to walk under it. You say you love sun, but you seek shelter when it is shining. You say you love wind, but when it comes you close your windows. So that's why I'm scared when you say you love me.”

― Bob Marley


#4 Undjuvion

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Posted 20 August 2016 - 23:24

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I think I agree kind of prefer this one more thank you!

 

 

hard after seeing first, u have the perspective now... what i would do if gave more criticism, is... maybe add a few glistening bits to corners of his armor, i would have said sparkle tho not as in girly way, as in prestiguous value to his armor, make him really huge! maybe gold or silver, if u can guess how i mean it :-)

 

 

edit: a few faded shadowy dark ghosts in the background that torment him would be cool too, ok ill stop ;p


Edited by Undjuvion, 20 August 2016 - 23:26.


#5 mumble

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Posted 20 August 2016 - 23:38

hard after seeing first, u have the perspective now... what i would do if gave more criticism, is... maybe add a few glistening bits to corners of his armor, i would have said sparkle tho not as in girly way, as in prestiguous value to his armor, make him really huge! maybe gold or silver, if u can guess how i mean it :-)

 

 

edit: a few faded shadowy dark ghosts in the background that torment him would be cool too, ok ill stop ;p

Not bad ideas any help :)


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“You say you love rain, but you use an umbrella to walk under it. You say you love sun, but you seek shelter when it is shining. You say you love wind, but when it comes you close your windows. So that's why I'm scared when you say you love me.”

― Bob Marley


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Posted 21 October 2016 - 03:03

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“You say you love rain, but you use an umbrella to walk under it. You say you love sun, but you seek shelter when it is shining. You say you love wind, but when it comes you close your windows. So that's why I'm scared when you say you love me.”

― Bob Marley



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