Revan's Story

One Night Revan was assigned to help a squad B to capture a Mutant Base.Well,as Revan was walking besides the squad with his Snub Nose Pistol drawed.He saw at the corner of his eye a Mutant Scout.The squad and him opened fire.One after another Revan's squads Soldiers were Falling...and dieing in their spots.
He saw a plasma Rifle and dashed picking it up.He shot up hiding behind a crate.He shot about 2 mutant's until about 25 more mutants came.
He kept fighting until he ran out of ammo.He finally found a clip on a dead soldier.He saw men in the shadow and thought they were mutants but quickly realized they were reinforcements.He ran up and the General asked"What Happend Revan?I give you an order and now the whole squad is dead and the mutans gone."Revan feeling intimidated replied"Sir,We were greatly out numbered by Mutant Brutes and we ran out of amm.."The General interrupted saying"No excuses Revan you are now officially out ofthe Squad return your badge.Revan handed his badge and walked into the never ending cyber world...

Part 2

Revan awoke to hear screaming and he looked around.He reached for his Pistol but felt nothing.The town was on fire.
He ran to the store and got ammo and a Rifle."This will do,Revan said to himself."He picked up about 5 Mags and some Stims and continued walking.
He saw some kind of gang setting the town on fire.He drawed his rifle and shot the first run.Blood splatered on Revans Face."Yuck"Revan said to himself.
Revan took out about two more but knew he was gone.He reloaded with another mag.Sweat running down his face.He tried to keep fighting but that was it.
He knew he was done for.He managed to pick himself and and he ran.He felt ashamed...Embarresed but he kept running and did not look back at all.

Part 3

Revan was alone.Not a single person or machine in sight he thought.
I need to find a shop to buy stims and ammo.After searching in his bag he found a combat knife.
"I can use this"Revan thought to himself.He kept walking but heard someone.He found a barrel and slowly crept behind it.
Revan saw some members of a nearby gang called the Looter gang talk.
As he was listening to their conversation one of the gang members saw him and said:"Hey,Get that Punk".
Revan searched around for some clips but was empty.He drawed his knife.
He ran up to the first member and slit his throat.Blood sprayed all over Revan.
He picked up the members clips and loaded his snub nose pistol and by a blink of an eye shot two other members.
The leader ran away from Revan like a coward.Revan drawed his gun and fired three times.Each shot landing on his back.
To Revans suprise the looter gang member had a couple clips and stims.Revan was very happy.Revan did not need to go to a shop now but he needed to go some where else...The Looter Gang Headquarters.

i can say that end really took me off guard 0.o

Lol I couldn't think of an ending

I say yes, you should make another, but try and keep to this character and maybe develop a bit more to it.... try adding a few things that make this character unique and try and expand a bit more. Very interesting go though

I thought it was good and that you should make some more.

Part two is out now look at main post to see it and rate it!

I liked part 2.

Part two is a little different to how part one was, but still showed you have some real talent at this...keep it up

Thanks Cristie yours is awsome too.

Part 3 out

That was really awesome revan. Im about to make one too.

pretty good