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Chronicles of Gothador; Seraphim's Story (Volume 1)

Started by gothador_seraphim , Sep 04 2004 16:14

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#21 mamori

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Posted 07 September 2004 - 07:09

:shock: , *runs away with tail between legs*

#22 gothador_ghosten

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Posted 10 September 2004 - 12:23

Very good story, anymore coming?

#23 Woja

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Posted 10 September 2004 - 13:23

This is wonderful!

#24 gothador_seraphim

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Posted 11 September 2004 - 02:59

For half the night they traveled through the lakevalle woods, the tension Seraphim felt was transferred to his steed Czar. The serene forest that he had ridden through earlier had taken on a nightmarish cast and was now the enemy. Once beautiful trees and bushes were now multi-armed creatures whose thorns and branches tore at their face and arms, and scratched their legs. Night eyes followed their progress. The ground would open up to try to swallow them as ravines and toppled logs appeared unexpectedly to block the way, but a slight shift in balance and Czar would either turn left, right or suddenly leap over an obstacle, never slowing and always moving forward. The brightness of the hunter’s moon gave light to their path, and his eyes never left the Orks trail as they rode. Seraphim’s thoughts also raced at a similar pace, “this is what I get for opening up…â€

#25 gothador_sinaarrgghh

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Posted 11 September 2004 - 03:38

NNNNOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hate cliff hangers, the next one better not be 5 days waiting. I'd go mad....der! :D

#26 gothador_27raven

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Posted 11 September 2004 - 21:27

Very nice… (and that’s an understatement!). I love reading your descriptions about the realm and the story just pulls you in. Thanks for sharing. I know it takes time to write, but each post makes it harder and harder to stop reading, so hurry up with the next installment! :P

#27 Fred

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Posted 31 October 2004 - 04:10

I like it, now post some more!

#28 gothador_seraphim

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Posted 21 August 2005 - 16:14

Seraphim was irritated, he kept trying to get some sleep as he wandered in and out of conciseness, but the light and darkness swirling in his vision would not allow him to rest. And that wasn’t the worst, what really pissed him off were the people who continued talking. A male and a female were having a conversation in the room. Didn’t they see he was tired and trying to rest?

“Brother I think you treat him badly.â€

#29 gothador_balord

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Posted 21 August 2005 - 20:26

Both the story and art work are very good! I'd bew new here abouts and I have to say that you have some very gifted people hanging out here. Your writing is great both here and in the other stories I've been following. As soon as I get re-employeed, I intend to join the ranks of supporter!

#30 Kayla

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Posted 21 August 2005 - 20:29

But you may always write without the supportership, we would be glad to have another writer on the boards.
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