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#1 fs_luckas17

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Posted 09 May 2010 - 22:00

Well im a newbie in making avys and sig but i wanna learn more so ill show what i can do and you tell me (if you want obviously) what i can do to improve. Thanks :).

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Ill edit for more.

#2 fs_fourbrezio

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Posted 10 May 2010 - 04:15

damn, where do I start?

1. Size - sigs should be smaller with roughly a 3:1 ratio. Like 300x100 pixels.

2. Colors - Base your color scheme off the render or stock you are using (You did that fairly well) But there's no blending to your background.

3. Text - Text can make or break a good signature, and yours has little blending and basic effects to compliment it.

4. Background - BGs can vary based on the style. But you need to view tutorials on how to compose a more appealing background

5. Everything needs to be improved, and practice is the name of the game. Head over to the Planet Render's forums for tutorials on how to improve your craft (IF you use Photoshop)

#3 fs_abhishek11

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Posted 10 May 2010 - 16:28

the 5th one and second one both have a line around the render which does not look good.still the 5th one is overall the best of them because it has lightning effects . as fourbrezio said head over to planetrenders forum and watch some tutorials . the ones you made are pretty fine for the start . you can do a nice job once you learn adding some depth and blend. and also working with fractals/c4d( that is not important though...grrrrimmhawk :P )

#4 fs_luckas17

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Posted 10 May 2010 - 21:40

Thanks for the advice, when i have time (maybe tonight or maybe tomorrow) i wil take a look a the tutorials you mentiones. For the 5th sign i watched a tuto and kinda like the result for the first tutorial based sign. I know i have A LOT to improve so i realy apreciate your advice :)

#5 fs_luckas17

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Posted 12 May 2010 - 02:18

Well i edited 3 of the 5 prev sigs, i only watched 1 tutorial and i think they look better.

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Please keep with the comments :)

#6 fs_khalsa500

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Posted 12 May 2010 - 02:20

Never ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever
Put text in a corner of a sig!

use the rule of thirds:
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#7 lostviking

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Posted 12 May 2010 - 02:24

You erased way to much of the Green Goblin render

#8 fs_luckas17

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Posted 12 May 2010 - 19:44

You erased way to much of the Green Goblin render


Yeah, it think so too but kinda like the result because it merge with the cloud background, like he is in the middle of the clouds but i erased it too much.

Ill look to the rule of the third guide, thanks :)

#9 fs_fourbrezio

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Posted 12 May 2010 - 20:56

PMed you in forum.


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