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#1 Haloartist

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Posted 15 July 2010 - 02:55

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Made for a guildie. I really focused on getting the flow right. lol

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#2 Dark Archon

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Posted 15 July 2010 - 03:00

The flow is nice, but looks a little weird at the bottom to me. Try rotating the bottom parts of the c4ds a little? I'm really not feeling the "IF" text at all, dunno if you could rescue it with a position change either, but it just looks outta place to me. Aside from that, it's rather nice, the lighting and depth are pretty good, and the effects are nice and not chaotic. Colors could probably be better though.

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Posted 15 July 2010 - 04:51

Overall, it's a very nice avatar; looks good as it is. Well-balanced effects match with the colors used.

I would brighten the rays of light to emphasis the shine, but not sure if that may overpower the image of the elf.

I also agree with darkarchon, the 'IF' text looks a bit odd. It looks like the text is transparent which makes it appear uneven. The 'I' looks shorter than the F (black spot on the upper half of the 'I').

#4 Haloartist

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Posted 15 July 2010 - 04:57

Overall, it's a very nice avatar; looks good as it is. Well-balanced effects match with the colors used.

I would brighten the rays of light to emphasis the shine, but not sure if that may overpower the image of the elf.

I also agree with darkarchon, the 'IF' text looks a bit odd. It looks like the text is transparent which makes it appear uneven. The 'I' looks shorter than the F (black spot on the upper half of the 'I').

Ya I did try to make the lighting stronger, but it seemed to strong so I left it the way it was.

And the I is shorter, because it's the font style.. I didn't do anything to it deliberately.
As for the black spot I will see what I can do.

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#5 fs_abogado

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Posted 15 July 2010 - 05:22

Maybe u should spell out 'Imaginary Friends', it may look better than 'IF'

#6 Haloartist

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Posted 15 July 2010 - 05:43

Fixed text with abo's idea, but the C4D was just to far down in the layers to fix.

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