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#1 Dark Archon

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Posted 15 July 2010 - 05:54

So, messing around with the idea of destroying a flow to create another flow and have them work in a chaotic sort of harmony I constructed this:

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Note: For the text, I was gonna use either 'break', 'destroy the flow', or something of that nature, but since I decided I wanted to do this either while listening to or thinkin about Dez Moines (the song by The Devil Wears Prada), I had predetermined that I wanted the text to be 'abandon calendar'.

Also, I got really lazy towards the end, so I kinda gave up on properly blurring/smudging and sharpening things at 600%+ zoom like I normally do.

The render used is the that of the character 'K',
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#2 fs_fourbrezio

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Posted 15 July 2010 - 06:26

Sorry for the double post :lol: :lol:

Stupid mouse :evil:

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Posted 15 July 2010 - 06:26

ehh. To be harsh, it looks like it's still developing. But I can start to see the kind of flow "harmony" you were trying to go for.

I couldn't read the text, had to actually read to find out. That and it's in a bit of an awkward position, right over the guy's chest doesn't really work well. And imo theres too much negative space, and with brightly colored C4Ds, it's easy to lose sight of a focal and/or find the colors to be too harsh.

That's about it from me :)

#4 Dark Archon

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Posted 16 July 2010 - 01:14

I think the text placement can be fine, I just have to do some adjustments. Noting the point you made about the c4d focus over the render, didn't really consider that when making the tag, I'll try to get another version up later if time permits.

Thanks, I appreciate it a lot,
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