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#1 ninjawolfy

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Posted 18 July 2010 - 15:07

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Just dont kill me :-p

#2 neil7887

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Posted 18 July 2010 - 16:26

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Just dont kill me :-p

Its good, I just don't like how you cut out the top part of her head :P makes it look a bit weird

#3 ninjawolfy

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Posted 18 July 2010 - 17:07

Lol fair enough .. I can move the render down a smidge I guess .. I rather wanted to get some of the body in as well without completly transforming it haha

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Posted 18 July 2010 - 17:14

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Couple more I just through together ..

#5 Dark Archon

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Posted 18 July 2010 - 18:55

The major things I wanna point out with what you've posted thus far is, your focal position is rather good, but your colors in the background of the tags do not always work with your focals in a nice harmony and your text placement could use some work. Ideally, you want as minimal text as possible in a tag, assuming it is not a typography tag, which none of those are. You also want to place your text relatively close to the render, and preferably only on 1 or 2 lines (where if you use 2 lines, both of the lines should be relatively close to each other again). The goal of text in tags is to serve as an identifiers mark, like an artists signature on a painting, it is there to identify the piece, but not to gain any of the viewers attention, the attention should always be on the focal and the surrounding effects.

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#6 ninjawolfy

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Posted 18 July 2010 - 19:01

Thanks ... The idea behind the text (On the kakashi Fire) was to fill in the empty space .. As I tried it with the sig it just made it look empty on the left .. i`ll revisit them and see what I can do though, Thanks. :)

#7 ninjawolfy

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Posted 18 July 2010 - 19:55

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Played a little with them ...

#8 ninjawolfy

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Posted 25 July 2010 - 18:49

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C&C?

Note: The font is going to be changed as soon as I find one I like online.

#9 Lsrpm

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Posted 25 July 2010 - 18:54

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I really have things to say about this since i love kakashi


It would have been nice if you put a fire ball or a dragon in the BG of some sort..It would really match his character...And that left side is complety empty and sometimes you wouldnt want your main focus to be all the way off to the right of the picture.

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#10 Wesleysdf

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Posted 25 July 2010 - 19:00

Your kakashi sig is good =) I guess you used the SigTutorials site to make it
The reaper is too big and plain...you need to work a little in it...also the render isn´t that good =|

#11 ninjawolfy

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Posted 25 July 2010 - 19:04

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You mean something like this one? The idea was that the text would have a fire effect as well as shown in the later sig (Which you quoted)

The grim reaper sig is just something I whipped up from an idea of time ... I Wasnt really sure about the reaper so much but I know I Wanted some kind of vortex background and a Fop Watch to show time ...

Im still looking at diffrent renders xD

#12 Wesleysdf

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Posted 25 July 2010 - 19:10

I have 2 ones for you work:
Posted Image <-- Bad quality, VERY NICE FLOW =D maybe a vertical sig
Posted Image <-- you can make an avi with this seriall killer :lol:

#13 ninjawolfy

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Posted 25 July 2010 - 19:21

Mmm i`ll have a look at Gambit ^^ Thanks.

#14 ninjawolfy

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Posted 25 July 2010 - 20:24

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Gambit :D

#15 Wesleysdf

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Posted 25 July 2010 - 20:39

When I said "NICE FLOW" I was hopping you use some effects in this direction...
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The BG Really don´t match with the render...that looks like roses =P anyway, nice pattern

#16 ninjawolfy

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Posted 25 July 2010 - 21:08

Ahhh fair enough ... I wasnt quite sure what to do with it so I went for a "fiery" kinda background ... of course when I finished it looked nothing like how I wanted it to in the end ... imma thinking of other things to do though ... more of a card themed background would definatly be good ^_^

#17 Wesleysdf

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Posted 25 July 2010 - 21:09

try add c4ds a little smudging and lots of gradient maps/photofilters to make it looks cool

#18 ninjawolfy

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Posted 25 July 2010 - 21:40

Okay then, i`ll have a look and see what I can do :)


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