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#1 fs_bebobebebo

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Posted 20 July 2010 - 02:18

Tryed Out Something New And Wanted To Know What People Think

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#2 stormfury3

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Posted 20 July 2010 - 02:34

very nice out come ,but i think the pen tooling is a bit over powering it takes away from the focal...

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Posted 20 July 2010 - 02:45

I actually Like the pentooling with a bit of strength to it, but I don't like the fact that it's breaking the flow on the right side.

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Posted 20 July 2010 - 03:02

i don't think "beautiful" is the best text choice for something urban. it just doesn't come into my mind.

but... the sig is amazing! great flow and a very nice feel. only problem for me is the two loops on the bottom left. they take away from the flow. it'd warp them so the stretch out to the left more

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Posted 20 July 2010 - 03:06

Pretty nice. BG flow and pentooling flow contrast. (The right BG flows the opposite direction.)

The render is... eh, modified, too much. She doesn't look realistic anymore.

That's all I have to say. Nice splatters and text. :)

#6 snuglebug

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Posted 20 July 2010 - 03:16

Nice.... I agree with the girl looking unrealistic though.




Off topic sorry! grunty.... why you not enter GGT?

#7 fs_grunty07

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Posted 20 July 2010 - 03:19

Nice.... I agree with the girl looking unrealistic though.




Off topic sorry! grunty.... why you not enter GGT?


Off topic: I haven't been here or on FS for a while. So I'm a little out of it right now. :lol:

#8 Dark Archon

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Posted 20 July 2010 - 03:32

Wow, I really like this one bebo, just lightly blur over areas of her chin and sleeve on the layer you topaz'd it.

To be honest, alot of your work is phenomenal in my opinion, but your use of the topaz filter kills it. Like in your Matt tag from BFMV, his hair and face looks warped too much from the topaz, as well as most of your backgrounds, however, I don't think topaz really ruins much of this tag.

Good stuff,
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Posted 20 July 2010 - 06:32

Wow, I really like this one bebo, just lightly blur over areas of her chin and sleeve on the layer you topaz'd it.

To be honest, alot of your work is phenomenal in my opinion, but your use of the topaz filter kills it. Like in your Matt tag from BFMV, his hair and face looks warped too much from the topaz, as well as most of your backgrounds, however, I don't think topaz really ruins much of this tag.

Good stuff,
Xel.

Did you ignore the fact that his flow was completely off?

Besides that I really like it. The topaz does give it a nice feel. If only it had not made the girl so unrealistic.

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#10 fs_bebobebebo

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Posted 20 July 2010 - 13:21

Tryed Fixing It Up A Bit From The Advice I Got

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I Lowered The Topaz Over The Focal To Make Her Look More Realistic
Blured Parts That Were Too Sharp
Changed Text To LadyPike (If I Remember Correctly She's The One That Likes Redheads)
Couldn't Change The Loops To The Left Or The Flow Too The Right Without Deleting And Redoing
Alot Of Layers And I Couldn't Be Bothered Lol So I Just Left Them How They Were

#11 Dark Archon

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Posted 20 July 2010 - 21:04

Wow, I really like this one bebo, just lightly blur over areas of her chin and sleeve on the layer you topaz'd it.

To be honest, alot of your work is phenomenal in my opinion, but your use of the topaz filter kills it. Like in your Matt tag from BFMV, his hair and face looks warped too much from the topaz, as well as most of your backgrounds, however, I don't think topaz really ruins much of this tag.

Good stuff,
Xel.

Did you ignore the fact that his flow was completely off?

Besides that I really like it. The topaz does give it a nice feel. If only it had not made the girl so unrealistic.

No, I didn't ignore that fact, because it isn't completely off. Flow doesn't have to be perfect lines or symmetrical. The flow here is asymmetrical, it's a split flow one a dominate side. The loops don't go with the flow, but don't kill it as they add a spiral effect.

The last version I like, though, I do notice that the splatter brushes go against the flow, aside from that you may have over blurred the border of her sleeve as to where it fades into the background, it looks a little weird; when I said to blur areas on the sleeve, I actually meant areas which were part of the sleeve where the topaz draws too many lines of contrast above, zoom in to like 500% to see what I'm talking about.

Looks good though Bebo, nice job.
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