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#1 Haloartist

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Posted 27 July 2010 - 04:21

This is a piece that will be up for auction along with many others I will be making.

This is also an example of the quality that I will be bringing to this Auction.

I will try to get the auction in up in a week or so.

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All Comment and Critique is appreciated.

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#2 lostviking

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Posted 27 July 2010 - 04:24

The "glowing" effect thing around it is too strong, especially over the face.

#3 Haloartist

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Posted 27 July 2010 - 04:31

The "glowing" effect thing around it is too strong, especially over the face.

Alright let me see what I can do to fix that. Thanks!

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#4 Haloartist

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Posted 27 July 2010 - 04:45

Did what I could to fix it.

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Editing main post with V2.

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#5 fs_grunty07

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Posted 27 July 2010 - 04:49

It looks pretty good.. though maybe still a teeny bit too bright. :P

But anyways, the areas away from the render look dull in contrast to the bright colors of the focal.

#6 fs_zman22180

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Posted 27 July 2010 - 05:26

Yeah, w/ the glow its really hard to make out what the focal is.. took me a while to see it xD :mrgreen:

#7 LadyPike

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Posted 27 July 2010 - 07:57

Yeah, w/ the glow its really hard to make out what the focal is.. took me a while to see it xD :mrgreen:

I still can't see what is it :|

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#8 Dark Archon

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Posted 27 July 2010 - 15:34

I can't make out the focal, as in tell what it is, and the top right hand portion of the screen looks weird, like you put a reverse black-transparent radical gradient over your tag and that area got affected by the black portion of it. The text is okay, but loose the glow on it. It also looks like you used topaz but didn't blur in areas that weren't supposed to be contrasted out. Lastly, fix the flow in the top left side of the screen, possibly add a soft strong-flowing linear c4d to that area.

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