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#1 Sustortias

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Posted 27 October 2010 - 14:41

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Posted 27 October 2010 - 19:36

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I wanted to try a 'comic book' style.

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I think...
A small black outline around the alien.
Change in the text "Alien"

and that's about it for me right now.

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#3 Sustortias

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Posted 28 October 2010 - 16:43

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I wanted to try a 'comic book' style.

cc welcome



I think...
A small black outline around the alien.
Change in the text "Alien"

and that's about it for me right now.


Thanks for the comment, edited 1st post, i didn't outline it but i boosted up the focal and darkened the sides a bit.

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Posted 29 October 2010 - 00:38

the weapon on it's back looks like the end of it is cut off either blend it into the bg ,or recreate something that looks like the end.

i assume was not part of the render?

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Posted 29 October 2010 - 05:01

the weapon on it's back looks like the end of it is cut off either blend it into the bg ,or recreate something that looks like the end.

i assume was not part of the render?


Was part of the render

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Posted 29 October 2010 - 05:07

i meant the part that is missing from the end of the weapon.

it doesn't look right just having it cut off like that it should be blended ,recreated ,or better yet find the stock that was use for the render and hope it has the missing part...

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Posted 29 October 2010 - 05:23

i meant the part that is missing from the end of the weapon.

it doesn't look right just having it cut off like that it should be blended ,recreated ,or better yet find the stock that was use for the render and hope it has the missing part...


There is nothing to add to it, the render came with it as is.

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Posted 29 October 2010 - 05:57

just because a render is missing a part you don't just use it as is you either blend it in to hide the missing part ,you try to recreate the missing part ,or you find a stock/render that has the missing part.

just leaving a straight cut off edge like that takes alot away from the sig.
but whatever don't listen to reason it's your sig.

just saying that it could easily be blended to make it look like because the weapon is being fired the end of it is hidden from smoke ,or some kind of explosion from it.

also the creatures right hand ( the one on the left side ) is poking over the border ,and that to doesn't look right when it's cut off like it is.

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Posted 29 October 2010 - 10:15

I'm ok with the hand pop out, it would be better with all the fingers, i see your point, but it kinda works ok as is.

I could add some gun fx, however i don't really want to distract the eye too far from the main part of the focal.

Thanks for comments.

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Posted 30 October 2010 - 23:31

Took your advice and did the v2.

Added the gun fx, pulled the gun back a touch and worked on lighting shading.

Also did a little cloning to make the hands look more realistically reaching out.

Thanks for the help.

The two can be compared at top of thread.

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Posted 30 October 2010 - 23:34

Took your advice and did the v2.

Added the gun fx, pulled the gun back a touch and worked on lighting shading.

Also did a little cloning to make the hands look more realistically reaching out.

Thanks for the help.

The two can be compared at top of thread.


the gun part looks much better ,but i would just put the fingers/claws behind the border.


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