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#1 Nazgul07

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Posted 30 October 2010 - 15:05

What d'you think ?

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#2 artistgorn

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Posted 30 October 2010 - 15:42

Sorry, really not feeling it

1. The entire signature is just dark....
2. Nice try of blending, but i don't think blurring the hands will help
3. Is that motion blur in the background? Nah, don't use it, it sort of kills it
4. Lightening ain't bad.
5. Show some depth please.

Overall, ain't bad and Kiu!

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#3 Bunnybee

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Posted 30 October 2010 - 17:05

I like it. Kind of monochromatic at first, but the more I look, the more it seems just fine that way. Maybe the bright parts could be a tiny bit brighter, but over all I really like it very much. :) I thought the difference between the rain and the face looked nice, clarity wise?

#4 aa0007

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Posted 30 October 2010 - 18:51

Nice attempt.

But to accurately represent depth, the hands should be sharper than the face :) I love the lightning though, nice job.

#5 Sustortias

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Posted 30 October 2010 - 21:21

Not too bad, just needs some boostage in the middle where his head is to help the depth a bit.

Apply image and set to overlay should do it, then erase around the edges/outer parts so those fade back again.

I used that render for a sig a while back, nice cut.

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#6 fs_emonick

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Posted 31 October 2010 - 08:14

Not too bad, just needs some boostage in the middle where his head is to help the depth a bit.

Apply image and set to overlay should do it, then erase around the edges/outer parts so those fade back again.

I used that render for a sig a while back, nice cut.

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#7 zerovaldesca

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Posted 31 October 2010 - 08:17

Nice attempt.

But to accurately represent depth, the hands should be sharper than the face :) I love the lightning though, nice job.


Actually, The human eye perceives what ever it is focusing on as sharper that its surroundings. So, If the view of the tag is focusing on his head, the hands would be blurred.

OT:
Very nice, I like the stormy background. Maybe try some space stocks and strengthening the lighting.

#8 Sustortias

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Posted 31 October 2010 - 10:58

This is the sig i made using the same render:-

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It was made ages ago for a battle with bebo but he never got around to entering.

I know the text is kinda meh lol, tis old work

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