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#1 souljahpug

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Posted 05 November 2010 - 01:15

Version1.
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Version2.
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Any tips and comments welcome.

#2 Godblade75

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Posted 05 November 2010 - 02:25

Meh. V1 is mucho better. More depth, better lighting. Render be too big though. >.< And render placement is awkward.

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#3 souljahpug

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Posted 05 November 2010 - 20:04

Thanks for input BUMP

#4 souljahpug

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Posted 06 November 2010 - 03:00

No feedback? :cry:

#5 Sustortias

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Posted 06 November 2010 - 03:21

I like v2.

Just darken the edges a bit and lose the light sabre maybe, (looks kinda wierd without an arm holding it).

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#6 souljahpug

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Posted 06 November 2010 - 14:12

I like v2.

Just darken the edges a bit and lose the light sabre maybe, (looks kinda wierd without an arm holding it).

I try to get rid of the saber without doing the whole thing over.

#7 Darkraiser

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Posted 06 November 2010 - 14:46

Use the clone and heal tool to get rid of the saber, it looks awkward.
Other than that, I think you should make the render a bit smaller, and make it a little darker, like v2.


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Is this copyright? I fixed up your image, got rid of the saber, and made it darker. Please don't sue me.
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Actually, I won't post it until someone says it's ok. XD

#8 souljahpug

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Posted 06 November 2010 - 14:59

Okay I removed the sabre with only 5 new layers :)

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#9 Darkraiser

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Posted 06 November 2010 - 15:00

That looks good, I guess I won't show you how I fixed your image after all. 8)

#10 souljahpug

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Posted 06 November 2010 - 15:02

That looks good, I guess I won't show you how I fixed your image after all. 8)

If theres an easier way please tell me. It didn't take me but like 2 minutes but still I don't like to waste time.

#11 Darkraiser

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Posted 06 November 2010 - 15:12

Here's what I got:
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I don't think it's better than yours, I just use the heal tool in gimp to fix it up.

#12 Bunnybee

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Posted 06 November 2010 - 17:33

I liked the first one best, just maybe without the light saber, like people were saying. They were right about a little smaller being better too, seemed to me anyway. I liked how dark and detailed the central image in the first version was, that seemed to kind of get lost with all the subsequent changes. That may have been intentional though. My taste is so rarely everyone else's. :P

Nice work. :wink:

#13 fs_theggold

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Posted 06 November 2010 - 19:40

I like V1 without Lightsaber, also add some kind of anti-rip so peopple don't steal it, your username would do but then comes the challenge of getting the right text.


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