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#1 Sustortias

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Posted 05 November 2010 - 03:41

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Made for an anime themed sotw using a set render.

The quote comes from Oscar Wilde, nice one Oscar!

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#2 fs_theggold

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Posted 05 November 2010 - 03:45

Is this supposed to be CnC? if so then change the title or say so in your post, I am a bit thrown off. If so then the focus is on her shoulder and the text doesn't work out well together. You could make the first text a bit harder so people don't have to lean in like I did to read it. Also a different font for first text, the s's look like backwards c's.

#3 YouNoSeeMe

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Posted 05 November 2010 - 11:47

I think it looks really nice... but i don't like this new blur(make me dizzy) thing that you do now. You know at her bow and around the apple/hand. The text is nice but i can barely see the "I" and the "temp" part of temptation i think would look better if it was just like the rest of the text... it just looks sloppy. Other than that i like it a lot.

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