Is this supposed to be CnC? if so then change the title or say so in your post, I am a bit thrown off. If so then the focus is on her shoulder and the text doesn't work out well together. You could make the first text a bit harder so people don't have to lean in like I did to read it. Also a different font for first text, the s's look like backwards c's.
I think it looks really nice... but i don't like this new blur(make me dizzy) thing that you do now. You know at her bow and around the apple/hand. The text is nice but i can barely see the "I" and the "temp" part of temptation i think would look better if it was just like the rest of the text... it just looks sloppy. Other than that i like it a lot.