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#1 CanTrustMe

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Posted 05 November 2010 - 07:01

Another piece I'd like CnC on. Got a lot of views on my last cnc, but not too many comments, if you're having a look don't hesitate to comment, I'll try my best not to be offended 8)

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#2 fs_theggold

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Posted 09 November 2010 - 05:58

Good piece but text isn't well placed that or well fonted.

#3 Ptrgriffin

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Posted 09 November 2010 - 06:00

I agree :)

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#4 souljahpug

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Posted 09 November 2010 - 14:41

I like everything except for the green on the sides.

#5 CanTrustMe

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Posted 09 November 2010 - 20:52

Okay thanks for the feedback I'll make a new version and post it soon

#6 fs_arial

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Posted 09 November 2010 - 23:38

First let me say I like this a lot! Colors are good and effects are laid in nicely.

Here's a few thoughts on possibly improving it.

I'm also not feeling the green on the sides, maybe slap a 50% black and white on top of that part of background? I really like the purple-y grey of the sky and colors of the effects with the colors of the render.

Can you darken the area behind his head and along the top side of his body so the light is coming up from below, not from behind him. I think it would really make it pop. Maybe brightening/highlighting the undersides of his arms a little with a hint of colored light (orange or yellow)

Try cutting off about an 1/8th of the whole image off the right side and seeing how it looks after that. The render is a bit too centrally placed, cutting off that little bit might shift the whole image into something more dynamic.

#7 CanTrustMe

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Posted 11 November 2010 - 05:17

New Version posted, minor changes

#8 fs_theggold

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Posted 11 November 2010 - 05:31

Looks way better.

#9 souljahpug

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Posted 11 November 2010 - 14:40

Looks way better.

#10 Roan

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Posted 11 November 2010 - 14:49

Very nice now without that green! Great work!

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#11 fs_arial

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Posted 11 November 2010 - 15:00

love version 2. :)


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