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#1 Roan

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Posted 06 December 2010 - 17:44

Yeah, tittle says it all...
Need your help :)

Comment, criticize, give some advice, help me... Do it all :D

First work to CnC...
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#2 fs_abhishek11

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Posted 06 December 2010 - 17:58

Yeah, tittle says it all...


Well when did I ask for help o_O

#3 ajred20

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Posted 06 December 2010 - 20:14

hey Roan :) long time since we talked. From a buyer's perspective both look great. Although in the 2nd sig on the right side the 3 brown spots are distracting imo and the knight looks a little too sharpened

#4 fs_grunty07

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Posted 07 December 2010 - 02:00

1st one looks pretty sweet. Maybe sharpening Spidey a little will help, but that's about it.

2nd one, rule of thirds. Too much of the cloudy areas/empty space, imo, so the eye gets distracted. Text is also a little plain.

Hope that helps.

#5 souljahpug

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Posted 07 December 2010 - 02:02

Spiderman one is awesome.

#6 Roan

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Posted 07 December 2010 - 02:16

Thanks :)
I'll get a new version with spiderman a bit sharpened tomorrow.
And for the second one, I really dislike it myself so won't even try changing it. I'll just scrap it and keep getting a bit more CnC on spiderman.

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#7 Darkraiser

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Posted 07 December 2010 - 02:50

On the spiderman, maybe a little more contrast with spiderman against background, otherwise it's good. Do I see softglow in action?

#8 Roan

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Posted 07 December 2010 - 03:32

Nope, no soft glow :)

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#9 fs_theggold

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Posted 07 December 2010 - 04:52

If you are scraping #2 can I have it?

#10 Roan

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Posted 08 December 2010 - 21:45

Sure, your name on it?
Still want comments on first :wink:

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