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#1 souljahpug

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Posted 03 January 2011 - 22:53

Please give constructive critisism on my newest piece.

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#2 Darkraiser

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 00:59

Dat be beautiful. Depth though? Also, the lighting doesn't match the render. From the render, it looks like the light should be in front of him, not behind him. ( Assuming the dragon is a guy )
And that green streak behind him doesn't fit.

I shall rate...a 8.7/10

#3 fs_theggold

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:05

Looks like a render slapped on a BG, then slapped some text on it.

#4 souljahpug

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:06

I'll just scrap this and make something else when I have the time.

#5 fs_theggold

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:08

No need, mess with lighting/hue/saturation and see if you can get it to look more natural.

#6 Darkraiser

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:27

There you go discouraging people again Theggold. :roll: And souljah, if you're going to scrap it, can I have it?

#7 fs_theggold

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:28

No need, mess with lighting/hue/saturation and see if you can get it to look more natural.



#8 jsustin212

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:28

before u go and scap it u think i could try a few things??

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#9 Godblade75

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:28

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Edited it a bit.

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#10 souljahpug

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:29

before u go and scap it u think i could try a few things??

Its horrible I'm just gonna make something else. Just trying to put my new logo on something.

#11 Darkraiser

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:29

OH MAI GAWD! WHAT DID YOU DO?!?!!?!?!?!?

#12 fs_theggold

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:30

Let me have the PSD, I might be able to help you as long as the render is a layer of itself.

#13 Godblade75

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:30

Let me have the xcf, I might be able to help you as long as the render is a layer of itself.


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#14 jsustin212

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:30

before u go and scap it u think i could try a few things??

Its horrible I'm just gonna make something else. Just trying to put my new logo on something.


so ill take that as a yess

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#15 fs_theggold

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:32

Let me have the xcf, I might be able to help you as long as the render is a layer of itself.


What ever.

Soul could I? I might be able to fix.

#16 souljahpug

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:38

Dioes it blend more now?
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#17 jsustin212

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:40

i liked the first one better tbh

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#18 jsustin212

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 01:45

instead of playing with where the lighting source is comming from try playing this how it looks on the dragon

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i just did a quick blur so i messed up the lettering but with the layers it would work

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#19 Darkraiser

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 04:04

I just turned the dragon around, did some lighting, blur, smudge, and some magic cloning.

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#20 fs_theggold

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Posted 04 January 2011 - 04:05

May I have the XTF so I can try to fix it?


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