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#1 fs_rampage200

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Posted 15 February 2011 - 20:13

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Any tips, on how to make it better?
I've pretty much lost my creativity and motivation.... so just testing random stuff....


#2 fs_supergirl1

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 03:42

too much lighting for me... use a simply border.. what is the background? why you don´t use a simply smudge... try tuts or video tuts

#3 forhorsmn

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 04:18

It does seem a little bright to me also, but I think is still looks pretty good.
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#4 fs_milomamas

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 05:31

Any tips, on how to make it better?

Honestly, i'm tempted to say: Start over.

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The blue annotations are as following:
The big area, looks like a gap of nothingness. If you are going to put the focal that small, then don't use a huge canvas. Filling space like that.. well.. not wise.

The text.. Unreadable. Try to avoid the 'Overlay' blending with text, specially with white fonts. And, please, another typeface. That one isn't that gorgeous ): And the size.. well.. work with the space as mentioned before

The smudging around (or blurring maybe?). Look, that tool is like a razor when you get to shave. Use it wrong or sloppy, and you will get cuts -ugh..- ):

The border. Use simpler, please. Start with 'Inner Glow' with Choke at 100%, size 1 or 2. You can't run without crawling first.

The colors. Once i said: 'Looks like when i put crayons in a blender'. I think i can say that again. Work on it.


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#5 fs_xxxepicxxx

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 05:52

my opinion it has to much going on i agree with milo start over

#6 fs_rampage200

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 09:04

Well.... that was pretty much my last piece..... so.... yeh....

#7 Zukira

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 12:18

don't give up - I know it can be painful having something you worked on ripped apart but they're trying to help. Can you link the render you used? Lets see if we can re-work this.

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#8 fs_rampage200

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 12:21

Trying to help? well.... i'll give myself 1 week, to improve, if i fail, i'll Delete Photoshop, my Renders, Backgrounds, Sigs, Avis, .PSD's, EVERYTHING related to graphics off the comp

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 12:25

thats a rather defeatist attitude. it takes alot of practice to get good. so, got a link for that render for the character?

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 12:27

Trying to help? well.... i'll give myself 1 week, to improve, if i fail, i'll Delete Photoshop, my Renders, Backgrounds, Sigs, Avis, .PSD's, EVERYTHING related to graphics off the comp


You're a loser.
Put some dedication into your work! Nobody here got really good at making graphics overnight.

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#11 fs_rampage200

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 16:14

thats a rather defeatist attitude. it takes alot of practice to get good. so, got a link for that render for the character?

Well..... Can't remember, where i got the Render.....



You're a loser.


You're sure about that....

#12 fs_darkjkr

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 17:47

i agree with sahardy :| when i first got on this site i was worse than you :| and now look at me im even worse :D jk :D , follow tutorials first and then ull start memorize them and do ur own style :D

#13 fs_rampage200

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 17:52

tutorials have only made me confused and WORSE!

#14 Zukira

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 18:34

Maybe if someone worked with you over skype or some other chat program that allows voice and share screen making something, so you can actively participate in their creation process and they can answer questions as you go along.

Some people learn better in different ways. Perhaps tutorials (even video ones which I find highly annoying myself) aren't your way.

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#15 fs_rampage200

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 18:38

Well..... There's no way, i'd get any better.... i think, i'm at my limit

#16 Zukira

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 18:43

The only limits are those you place on yourself.

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#17 fs_rampage200

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 18:44

Well, i'd like to be limitless, but it seems, i can progress any further....

#18 fs_rampage200

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 18:49

http://i55.tinypic.com/2wez5ar.jpg
a little Phone BG, i worked out.....
Too bad, the forum doesn't show it....
"Your images may only be up to 600 pixels high."

#19 YouNoSeeMe

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 18:52

I like the phone BG... pretty nice :)

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#20 fs_rampage200

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 18:53

You're probably just saying that, to be nice....


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