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#1 fs_cibonazg

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 18:29

I tried some smudging for the first time...and this is the result...

and CnC would be more then great!!

Thanks!!!

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#2 jsustin212

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 18:31

i think a little more smudging around the render to blend him in more and i dont think you should have left out the smudge where the text is like that
other then that i like it =)

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#3 fs_cibonazg

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Posted 16 February 2011 - 18:33

thanks...but i smudged the part around text...only spare that "town"...

thanks for comment...i ll try to do more smudging around the render...

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Posted 17 February 2011 - 07:27

i hope that now this is little better...

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Posted 17 February 2011 - 07:49

Looks good for a first attempt, the focus is a little small and as a result your text is also too far from the focus. I wouldn't have sized the render down so much, try using his head and the upper part of his chest as the focus. As for the text it's almost there, for one bring the subtext closer together and to the main text and each line closer to the one above. I'd also have the text running from the left rather than the right it doesn't look right the way it is. Finally bring the text closer to the focus and you'll have a great piece :)

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Posted 17 February 2011 - 08:06

really appreciate it...i ll try to do so then...

thank you very much!

#7 fs_cibonazg

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Posted 17 February 2011 - 08:30

hmm...you were right...i think now is better...

only text looked weird near focal...so tried this way...

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#8 CanTrustMe

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Posted 17 February 2011 - 08:54

Nice :) you did a great job

#9 fs_cibonazg

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Posted 17 February 2011 - 09:12

Thank you very much...it means a lot, especially to hear it from you!

so then i ll try to smudge more!!!hehe

ps...thanks snugle for few pointers!


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