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#1 Godblade75

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Posted 22 February 2011 - 19:51

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CnC please.

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#2 Godblade75

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Posted 22 February 2011 - 20:07

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Lighting toned down a bit.

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#3 fs_spiiderxse

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Posted 22 February 2011 - 22:29

amazing

#4 snuglebug

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Posted 22 February 2011 - 22:31

the lighting toned down defiantly looks better. Nice c4ds :)

#5 Godblade75

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Posted 22 February 2011 - 22:42

the lighting toned down defiantly looks better. Nice c4ds :)

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Thanks! Do you think the yellow c4d on the right kills the flow?

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#6 fs_spiiderxse

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Posted 22 February 2011 - 22:49

nope

#7 Wesleysdf

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Posted 22 February 2011 - 22:51

Sorry gblade. Of course I think your improving a lot, but, the lightning, flow, and subtext on that piece are totally wrong. If you fix that, the piece will be really great, but I think you will have to remake it

#8 Godblade75

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Posted 22 February 2011 - 23:42

Sorry gblade. Of course I think your improving a lot, but, the lightning, flow, and subtext on that piece are totally wrong. If you fix that, the piece will be really great, but I think you will have to remake it


Hmm...I see what you mean with the flow (if you're referring to the yellow c4d), but could you explain why the lighting and subtext are off?

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#9 Godblade75

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Posted 23 February 2011 - 03:05

I added Kanye. :P

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#10 fs_spiiderxse

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Posted 23 February 2011 - 03:08

I wanna link to your c4ds

#11 fs_supergirl1

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Posted 23 February 2011 - 03:09

for the second: better flow... too much lighting and it is in a bad place it should be in the left... you must see the natural lighting of the render first.. don´t like the text or the subtext...

#12 jsustin212

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Posted 23 February 2011 - 03:10

2 is too bright imo

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#13 Godblade75

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Posted 23 February 2011 - 03:11

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Better lighting? Plus, the lighting already was on the left...also, what's wrong with the text?

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Posted 23 February 2011 - 03:13

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Better lighting? Plus, the lighting already was on the left...also, what's wrong with the text?


well then put in the right above his face.. and for the text..I just don´t like the font :|

#15 Godblade75

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Posted 23 February 2011 - 16:13

omfg kobe is fail. :cry: I don't think I can fix it without restarting.

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#16 Godblade75

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Posted 23 February 2011 - 17:49

Oh noes Wes is going to kill me. :P

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#17 Wesleysdf

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Posted 23 February 2011 - 18:26

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#18 Godblade75

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Posted 23 February 2011 - 18:30

Hmm...didn't I use Flow #2 already? And I toned down the lighting in V2.

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#19 Wesleysdf

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Posted 23 February 2011 - 18:32

oh well, I dont have time to open paint anymore :/


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