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#1 Godblade75

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 02:27

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CnC please.

Yes text is on overlay.

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#2 Wesleysdf

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 02:30

Do you notice the lightspot is totally wrong placed?
Also, why pink? =P

#3 souljahpug

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 02:31

Lighting is off if you look at sasuke's face you can see the lighting is supposed to come from infront of him. I don't like how the sig looks red either. The sig is ok but it still has alot of room for improvement.

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 02:32

Do you notice the lightspot is totally wrong placed?
Also, why pink? =P


Oh crap, forgot to delete that layer. xD And pink FTW!

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#5 Godblade75

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 02:33

Lighting is off if you look at sasuke's face you can see the lighting is supposed to come from infront of him. I don't like how the sig looks red either. The sig is ok but it still has alot of room for improvement.


Yeah, I know lighting is off, I'll change it. Red is color preference, your opinion, but I chose it cause sharingan is red. :P How can it be improved besides that? Seems to me you're being a bit biased with that comment. Maybe I just took it wrong.

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#6 Wesleysdf

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 02:35

Lighting is off if you look at sasuke's face you can see the lighting is supposed to come from infront of him. I don't like how the sig looks red either. The sig is ok but it still has alot of room for improvement.


Yeah, I know lighting is off, I'll change it. Red is color preference, your opinion, but I chose it cause sharingan is red. :P

All I see is pink or some kind of violet :/ Is it's happening only with my eye?

#7 Godblade75

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 02:36

Lighting is off if you look at sasuke's face you can see the lighting is supposed to come from infront of him. I don't like how the sig looks red either. The sig is ok but it still has alot of room for improvement.


Yeah, I know lighting is off, I'll change it. Red is color preference, your opinion, but I chose it cause sharingan is red. :P

All I see is pink or some kind of violet :/ Is it's happening only with my eye?


Nope, originally it was supposed to be red, but I put touches of magenta stuffz too.

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#8 TreeFrog

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 02:37

Red I would understand, but there is no red. This is pink dude. Also, you're really overdoing the lighting, you should have shadows as well.

#9 souljahpug

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 02:37

Yea it does look pink. It looks kinda reddish too. I don't know maybe I just don't know my colors lol Back to preschool for me.

#10 Godblade75

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 02:44

v2 up.

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#11 Wesleysdf

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 02:45

move the lightspot a bit more to left and get out of all this pink/manganneta colour o-o

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 02:49

there is a white line near his head, get rid of it

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 03:05

Pink, are you kidding me? I see shades of blue. >.>
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Okay, so get rid of the pink hue, and get the light in front of him. That's all.

#14 Lsrpm

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 03:29

Good render would want a render like this

but Pink just doesnt fit sasuke..most renders have to fit the characters...and the effects are too much around his face which kills the quality a bit..but overall its a good sig i would buy it if you did these changes

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#15 Sustortias

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 05:29

V2 is much better.

Personally i reckon if you kept the left side as clean as the right side and lose the white line this would rock.

I really like it.

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#16 fs_kyotenshi

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 10:30

Wait...am I the only one that likes it pink? :oops:
It looks a bit too bright to me though, it could use some shades.

The text on overlay looks nice btw. :D

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Posted 27 February 2011 - 14:39

Lighting is off if you look at sasuke's face you can see the lighting is supposed to come from infront of him. I don't like how the sig looks red either. The sig is ok but it still has alot of room for improvement.


RED!!!??!! lol! i think your eyes are losing it because of all the pink :D


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