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#1 fs_xxxepicxxx

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Posted 01 March 2011 - 20:48

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i dont no what do you think i should do to this i cant think of what to do it looks good but i feel its missing something

#2 Wesleysdf

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Posted 01 March 2011 - 20:53

yep, lightning effects, stocks, c4ds, depth and adjustment layers =] The motion blur on the render doesnt helps

#3 fs_xxxepicxxx

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Posted 01 March 2011 - 21:01

lighting effects that would work
stocks well i do love naruto are you saying that i used a bad one if so could you show me one that would be better
c4ds????????is that a ps term cause i use gimp
depth really dont no what you mean by that
adjustment layers so in oherwords move naruto somewhere else right
motion blur wasent used but i no what you mean

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Posted 01 March 2011 - 21:02

The one and only thing I like about the avatar is the colours.

#5 fs_xxxepicxxx

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Posted 01 March 2011 - 21:04

well thats a plus

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Posted 01 March 2011 - 23:20

~Fixing the lighting would help.
~I think Wes might mean using a stock for a background like a forest or a beach.
~c4ds can be used for Gimp and PS, usually as an effect (I use 'em a lot) Use this link then switch over to images to get an idea what they are :) http://lmgtfy.com/?q=c4d
~By depth it means to bring the focal (Naruto for example) out of the background. I think because of the effects you used the focal is too blended into the background.
~Ahm, I'm not sure if I'm thinking of the right thing when it comes to adjustment layers so I won't say anything on that.

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#7 Sustortias

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Posted 01 March 2011 - 23:34

I like the effect on parts of the render, perhaps lose it more around the main facial parts and keep it around the top of the head.

Darken up that muddied patch on the upper left hand side, it's pulling the eye to much.

Text isn't too bad, a little over blended at the beginning.

Overall could use a little lighting C4D to finish it up.

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Posted 03 March 2011 - 06:39

thank you for your critisisam


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