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#1 fs_hndofgod

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Posted 16 July 2011 - 04:27

go ahead rip me apart http://desmond.image....jpg&res=medium

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Posted 17 July 2011 - 21:58

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#3 Wesleysdf

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Posted 17 July 2011 - 22:01

much better than your sigs. But you made a very bad mistake...you forgot to take off him tentacles :/ They break out all the flow the piece have. If I was you, Id remake the piece or start another. This is the main problem there, no flow, no good art :P

#4 fs_cristobal7

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Posted 17 July 2011 - 22:03

And while your at it, add a 1x1 border, make your text smaller and move it beside his face. Make the text impact :)

#5 fs_hndofgod

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Posted 17 July 2011 - 23:56

ill take into mind i cant seem to get text correct though i thought the text was small and placed right in this situation... border im not really a big fan of them sometimes they take away from the picture. yes the tenticles take away from the flow a bit but are part of the picture so i kept them ill try agaain soon :)

#6 fs_cristobal7

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Posted 18 July 2011 - 00:14

Yupp just try one out with all we said and itll work this time :)

#7 fs_hndofgod

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Posted 18 July 2011 - 01:14

ok i didnt use the same image seeing as i dont usually save the psd but heres a another of the same person and followed some of what you said Posted Image

#8 Wesleysdf

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Posted 18 July 2011 - 01:20

the avatar is much better now :]
Of course, there's always how to improve, but now that you have an idea of what a graphic should not be, better start reading tutorials to learn new skills

#9 fs_cristobal7

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Posted 18 July 2011 - 03:03

^
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l WHAT HE SAID! You have what you need to know what its NOT, now learn how to do it :)

#10 fs_hndofgod

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Posted 18 July 2011 - 04:07

thanks and i appreciate your feedback i was really happy with that last avi it came out nice

#11 fs_cristobal7

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Posted 18 July 2011 - 04:48

Try to place text near where your focusing. I usually place them beside faces.
This came out cause I saw your sigs again :P


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