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#1 rebtex

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 03:45

This is a GFX Battle between SKevin and hndofgod.

Please vote on 1 piece but leave comments and criticism on both of the.

The voting will end in roughly 24 hours at 04:00 server time on the 5th of August.

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#2 SKevin

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 03:46

Add the poll to this.

#3 rebtex

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 03:49

Add the poll to this.


There is no need. People vote in their posts where they add CnC. That is how all GFX Battles work on these forums.

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#4 Godblade75

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 03:58

*facepalm* SKevin put his name on it. :lol:

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#5 fs_hndofgod

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 03:59

i did too oh well lol

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:01

I was gonna point it out. But since both of them did it, I just sort of ignored it. I thought seeing previous artworks you could see who did which one fairly clearly anyways.

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#7 rebtex

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:05

Considering this, would you guys like to do different pieces? It is somewhat unfair to know who made what piece. Lots of biased votes happen.

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#8 fs_hndofgod

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:06

yeah im up for it

#9 SKevin

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:08

Considering this, would you guys like to do different pieces? It is somewhat unfair to know who made what piece. Lots of biased votes happen.


Its okay, I don't care if poeple don't vote for me. I know I won already tho. Clearly I did better text, sizing of render, background, blending.

If you really need to tho..

#10 rebtex

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:10

Considering this, would you guys like to do different pieces? It is somewhat unfair to know who made what piece. Lots of biased votes happen.


Its okay, I don't care if poeple don't vote for me. I know I won already tho. Clearly I did better text, sizing of render, background, blending.

If you really need to tho..


That is up to the voters to decide. Not the makers. :roll:

I will find a new render real quick. Give me a few minutes.

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#11 fs_hndofgod

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:11

Its okay, I don't care if poeple don't vote for me. I know I won already tho. Clearly I did better text, sizing of render, background, blending.

If you really need to tho..

childish

#12 SKevin

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:12



Its okay, I don't care if poeple don't vote for me. I know I won already tho. Clearly I did better text, sizing of render, background, blending.

If you really need to tho..

childish


You know its true though

#13 rebtex

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:12

http://planetrenders...our138mbhq3.png

Go to work! Message me the results and I will post a new battle thread.

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#14 fs_slomoe

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:14

mind if i jump in on this and make it a three way?

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:15

mind if i jump in on this and make it a three way?


It was sort of a challenge between conflicting interest, not an open battle. Sorry.

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#16 fs_slomoe

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:17

np i was just a little bored lol

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:19

Uhh can I still post my cnc even though there will be a new battle thread? Might be helpful to the two of them.

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#18 rebtex

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:20

Uhh can I still post my cnc even though there will be a new battle thread? Might be helpful to the two of them.


Sure Cassa. Feel free.

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:29

Feel free to take extra time on the entries as I am going to bed. If I have both entries by morning I will post the thread. Good night all.

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#20 Cassafras

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Posted 04 August 2011 - 04:30

Thanks Reb! Might be a good idea for the both of you to know what to work on. Some points may sound like I'm being harsh but understand I'm only trying to help.

Oh and don't reply saying that through my cnc one person's was better than the other. Just look at what I wrote for you and think about those points as you make your new pieces.

A)
Good-I like the color palette this artist chose as well as the effects used. Text placement seems reasonable.
Bad-Unfortunately this is where I'll be going into a bit of detail. The squiggly effects seem to create a flow that follows Spidey's left arm. But, the (c4d?) contradicts this flow and instead follows Spidey's left leg; this makes me unsure which path to follow. Choose one way and make MOST if not ALL your effects go that way. The light source seems to be in the wrong place since I consider the white area in the bottom right. I think the light would be coming from the top left corner or even from behind. The render unfortunately seems to be just stuck on top of the background, with lowered saturation and was slightly oversharpened. The text itself is not the best. I suggest downloading some font packs or just looking around dafont.com and experimenting what text works. The color I would see as a dark pink sort of color, the purple pulls too much attention to the text instead of the focal.

B)
Good-The light source is in a good spot and comes from a source outside the picture. The text seems to have reasonable placement and is ok colorwise (although a little bit higher would've been nice). Flow goes in one direction.
Bad-There are places that are blurred that don't look like they should be blurred. I'm not a big fan of the effects (smudging?) around Spidey. A small gaussian blur would've been nice so the effect would still be there, but doesn't disrupt the flow or take attention away from spidey. The random black patch in the bottom left corner is sorta distracting. It could just be me but I feel like the render is slightly out of proportion. I could just be tired though.

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