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#1 xD34thx

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 16:37

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So it's been awhile since I've done Graphics. Tried new things and this is the outcome. Would appreciate some CnC please. :)

Render: http://planetrenders... ... play_media

#2 koenvdv

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 16:41

se ve muy bien
(it looks verry good)

#3 Wesleysdf

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 16:45

olha, os dois principais erros que eu tou vendo são:
1 - o texto que não segue o fluxo(flow) dos efeitos. tenta colocar ele perto dos ombros da mulher ou algum canto que não quebre o movimento da imagem, se é que vc me entende;
2 - a tonalidade das cores, principalmente em relação à iluminação. eu tou vendo basicamente 3 tonalidades de cores pra os efeitos: um branco meio apagado, um vermelho da cor do cabelo dela e o preto do fundo. vc poderia ter variado mais entre as tonalidades dessas cores, um bom começo é adicionar uma cor mais brilhante como foco de luz (que pelo visto fica perto da espada na direção espada->cabeça diagonalmente).

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 16:46

Wesley I hate you ;P

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 16:47

English :) I understand Spanish and speak it but prefer English. And it's weird its in .png format yet bad quality on here. Help :)

#6 MyCurse

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 16:48

It looks ok, however...

The empty black space at the extreme left is very annoying to look at...
I also think the border is a pixel too thick...but that's just me.
And you've erased the border a little to fit in your render's head...that doesn't make much sense since the head is still cut..
I like the choice of font, however the text could be closer to your focal. Things needing most improvement is the empty black space at either sides of the sig.

#7 Wesleysdf

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Posted 21 April 2012 - 16:49

oh dang...I thought you knew portuguese :( :(


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