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Posted 12 January 2013 - 16:43

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Posted 14 January 2013 - 00:26
thanks youVery good blending, but the colours are too saturated I think. You've picked a good light source but it's not prominent enough.
Posted 16 January 2013 - 02:33
Posted 16 January 2013 - 02:43
no it didn't, not at all. i posted this to get more advice to get betterThe Good: Colors are good, and blending is also done well. The lighting is placed in the correct position to cooperate with the render. There is a very static feel to the image, which works considering the render doesn't have much flow to it. The smudging for the background is also very well done.
The Bad: There doesn't appear to be any real depth. The effects in the foreground and the text are just as apparent as Naruto's face. I would adjust the sharpness of the foreground so that attention is drawn to his face, and not his hands or the text. The text is good in color, but placed a bit to far towards the outside of the sig. Also, lowering the opacity of the word "Naruto" would help draw attention away from it. If you follow the rule of thirds to a tee, then most work will look much better. The blending around his arms is a bit erratic and noticeable.
Hopefully this doesn't come off as rude or overly critical. These are just things that I noticed. I hope that this is helpful for you on future pieces.
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